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{\it Name:}  Max Pettinelli
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Content and Structure -- The paper
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\item{1.}  Has a clearly stated topic or question that it will address -- 10
\item{2.}  Does address the topic or question -- 5
\item{3.}  Has a clearly articulated and logical structure:
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\itemitem{a.}  First paragraph lays out the topic or question -- 10
\itemitem{b.}  Later paragraphs have topic sentences and clearly identifiable main ideas -- 10
\itemitem{c.}  Transitions between paragraphs are logical -- 10
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\item{4.}  Accurately presents facts and viewpoints of sources -- 10
\item{5.}  Provides sufficient textual evidence to support the argument -- 10
\item{6.}  Is concise, clear, and not too repetitive -- 10
\item{7.}  Has a clearly identifiable conclusion -- 10
\item{8.}  Has a convincing argument that draws together the evidence presented -- 13
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Total: 98 (A)
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Style and English Usage -- The paper
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\item{1.} Is clear, direct, and appropriate in tone -- 20
\item{2.} Is free of misspellings -- 10
\item{3.} Is free of grammatical mistakes -- 9
\item{4.} Avoids incomplete sentences -- 10
\item{5.} Avoids run-on or overly complicated sentences -- 10
\item{6.}  Uses correct punctuation -- 10
\item{7.} Is free of jargon, cliches, and misused words -- 10
\item{8.} Cites quotations and/or references correctly -- 10
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Total: 99 (A)
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{\it Comments:}  Good work on the rewrite!
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