Juliana Surratt -- The Song of the Siren

   
   Very imaginative story/poem! Centering the story around a Siren who 
   has metamorphosed into a something like a modern singer/musician, 
   but who retains the capacity to destroy men, such as the character 
   Ovid, who still have the ability to hear her song as it originally sounded,
   is a clever idea.  And you carry this off very well, for the most part. 
   Writing the story as an actual poem was a courageous choice.  The 
   decision to use a lot of rhyming couplets might not have been the 
   best one, though, because I think you might have felt forced into using
   a few rather "flat" and hackneyed rhymes ("day - May") and 
   a few that are just slightly strange ("Ovid - quid").  That's
   OK though; I applaud your daring.  The one slip I saw was
   that you seem to be confused about the noun form of the verb
   "metamorphose" -- it's "metamorphosis."  The Siren "metamorphoses"
   but the process she undergoes is a "metamorphosis."

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