Liam O'Toole -- Flipping the script

   This is an excellent analysis of the relationship between Othello in the 
   Seraglio and its primary source in Shakespeare.  You have a nuanced and
   perceptive appreciation for the similarities and differences between
   the opera and the play.  Your writing here is also much more natural than 
   in the Herodotus paper and your sentences flow much better.  I would say that 
   this style (perhaps without the opinions expressed in the first person)
   is more than appropriate for almost any academic writing -- aim for
   this in the future!

   One very small point -- in the last sentence before the concluding paragraph,
   it should be "murderers," not "murders"

   Grade:  100 (A+)