Lizzie, 

Your "lighter" paper on Hamlet is excellent.  You have caught the spirit of the
assignment perfectly and you seemed to have some fun with it, which is exactly 
what I hoped would happen.  

I just have a few minor comments about a particular usage issue.  I know it's
common now to say you are "basing something off" something else or "building off"
something.  But this just sounds wrong to me.  A building stands *on* a base, 
not *off* it.  So that's the reason for the following suggestions:

"enough evidence to base a plot of revenge off on?" -- how about 
"enough evidence to be the basis of a revenge plot?" 

"To build off of the horse reference Hamlet used earlier, somebody should’ve 
asked him, ‘Why the long face?’"  LOL -- but how about "build on" rather than
"build off of"

Content -- A

Structure/Mechanics -- A