Isabel, Your "lighter" paper on Hamlet is excellent. You have caught the spirit of the assignment perfectly and you seemed to have some fun with it, which is exactly what I hoped would happen. Very good! I think you just sent the same version I saw before since I didn't find a citation for the photo of Sir Laurence Olivier as Hamlet. When you use something like this in a piece of writing for a course (even something relatively informal), you should get in the habit of always giving the source. Content -- A Structure/Mechanics -- A-