Callan, 

     Excellent work on the essay on Huckleberry Finn.  You have developed
   a very strong articulation of what Twain meant by the "deformed conscience"
   and "sound heart" of his main character in this book.   Your writing here is
   also very strong.  The only comment I have there is that you occasionally
   verge into colloquial diction with phrases like "messing with Jim’s head"
   at the bottom of page 3.  Something like "confusing and deceiving Jim" 
   would fit better with the tone of the rest of the paper.  

   Content/Evidence -- A

   Structure/Mechanics -- A