Isabel, 

     This is a very good improvement over the first version. The focus now clearly       
   shows how Odyssesus is a 3-dimensional character, and that is what makes
   him such a compelling character, I think -- he's a recognizably human, flawed
   person.  He's "god-like," supremely cunning, and very proud of himself. But 
   he can also get carried away by that pride.  And he really does have deep 
   feelings that I think we have to admit are real and true, even if he doesn't
   change in the ways we might think he should, or that we expect him to.

     One point, though--your last sentence: "From least significant to most, he 
   solidifies the clever, rash, proud King of Ithaca that he was when he left for 
   Troy a long 20 years prior" is not very clear.  First, I'm not sure what the 
   "from least significant to most" is referring to.  Do you mean from the least
   significant parts of his character to the most significant parts?  Or was it
   something else?  Also, the choice of "solidifies" kind of undercuts what
   you are trying to say because that implies a sort of change.  I think something
   simpler like "remains" or even "stays" is more like what you want.  Finally 
   the "prior" should probably be something like "before" or earlier.  I think
   "prior" is always used in phrases like "prior to" something.        

   Content/Evidence

   A

   Structure/Mechanics

   A-